ext_123737 ([identity profile] safewrite.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] pjthompson 2010-08-05 10:24 pm (UTC)

IMHO

Lush prose means lovely images that do not intrude on the story: they enhance and support it. Overwritten prose is tacked on and detracts from the overall experience of reading.

When description, similes and metaphors give a story wings, that's great. When they cover it in too many layers of paint, it distracts - and that's a crying shame.

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