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pjthompson ([personal profile] pjthompson) wrote 2010-08-06 12:18 am (UTC)

Lush prose for me has a pleasing rhythm, and evokes the senses.

Yes, exactly, that evocation and rhythm. Language that pulls you along toward a goal, or toward understanding, rather than being merely about itself.

I liked your list of overused words, too. I agree with them.

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