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The rewrite of A Rain of Angels, she is finished. Many things about this novel pain me, but I am done. Done, done, done.
I've gone back and tried to plump up the backstory of the villain because once again I've managed to write a paper thin antagonist. My baddies either have way the hell too much backstory or none at all. One day I will learn to walk that tightrope. In the meantime, I will wear a parachute.
Now, I will lay this aside for a week or so, then reread selected chapters, then...out she goes, for better or worse!
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I've gone back and tried to plump up the backstory of the villain because once again I've managed to write a paper thin antagonist. My baddies either have way the hell too much backstory or none at all. One day I will learn to walk that tightrope. In the meantime, I will wear a parachute.
Now, I will lay this aside for a week or so, then reread selected chapters, then...out she goes, for better or worse!
SMF:
Arial:
TNR: