Yeah, there's definitely a style change that's required when the action kicks in. I know it's something I'm always fioghting -- I usually have to go back and replce lots of 'and' and 'but' with periods. I usually wind up with a mental image of teh fight scenes in Bourne Supremacy, where everything is really choppy and you just see a series of punches or grapples -- nothing really continuous.
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Date: 2007-03-15 01:26 am (UTC)