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Two things happened this week: (1) it was the end of the Fiscal Year at work and (2) I finished the second draft of A Rain of Angels.

Yes, I finally gave up calling it the 1.5 draft and realized it really was closer to the second draft. The labyrinth was once more successfully negotiated. It still needs scrubbing, especially the language, but I've got to give it a rest now.

Does it hold up? I think so, but I am so totally not sure at this point. It's seems kind of goopy, kind of goofy—but I'm fresh out of perspective at the moment. I have certain things—comments, et al.—that I highlighted as I went so I could revisit them after I'd reread/reworked the whole thing. I'll try tackling them next week, but not this weekend as originally planned.

Because of the end of the FY thing. Busy, fricking busy, at work and I'm trashed. Some years the FY goes by with hardly a ripple. This was not one of those years. This year was a try-to-cram-five-tons-of-effluvia-into-a-one-ton-pipe kind of year. So it goes.

And those of you whose ms. I am currently reading (all one of you): I'm still reading, but events most definitely overtook me. Soon, I promise.

(Ha! Leon Redbone singing Ain't Misbehavin' followed Ethel Waters, followed by The End by the Doors. There's clearly a message there, but I'm too tired to figure out what iTunes is trying to tell me.)

Date: 2007-09-29 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hominysnark.livejournal.com
YAY for finishin'!

Date: 2007-09-29 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wldhrsjen3.livejournal.com
Cheers for the second draft - and yay for reaching the end of the fiscal year still breathing! Sounds like it was quite a headache! I hope you have a chance to recover this weekend.

Date: 2007-09-30 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jmeadows.livejournal.com
Woo hoooo!

Nothing but accomplishments!

Date: 2007-09-30 06:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
Yay for surviving FY!

YAY YAY for second drafts!

Date: 2007-09-30 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kmkibble75.livejournal.com
Damn! That's a pretty impressive finish time on the second draft! :-)

When do we get to see what changes you made?

Date: 2007-09-30 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Thanks. I didn't make any huge changes, just cleaned up the places where I'd changed my mind as I went. One of the few advantages of taking so long to write a first draft is that you get plenty of opportunity to rethink the plot. :-/ Which is not to say I'm not left with a feeling that maybe I should make more changes...I just don't know at this point.

I'll take another week to revisit the notes I made as I went and then, maybe, I'll see if anyone wants to read it.

Date: 2007-10-01 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kmkibble75.livejournal.com
Ah, okay... I will wait patiently. :-)

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