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Making this up as I go along
Dec. 30th, 2006 04:52 pmBlargh! I've spent the day revising, although I tried really hard to work around the problem I'd created for myself in Charged with Folly. The first part of chapter 8 went really well, but I got stuck because of some characters I failed to introduce earlier in the story. So I went back and wrote them in: four in all.
OWW readers: If you want to catch up on the new material in chapter 5, I've updated the post and bracketed the new material (in 3 places) with [NEW] and [END NEW]. There's also a link posted in the author's notes which takes you to some new material for chapter 3 which introduces a fourth new character. They don't materially change chapter 5--just made it an even longer travelogue--but all of these folks will be coming into play later on, in one way or another.
Blarghity blargh! First drafts are so much fun.
Other than revising, I've been working around the house the last two days. I've finally gotten my energy back and I thought I should accomplish something before going back to work on Tuesday. ::sigh::
OWW readers: If you want to catch up on the new material in chapter 5, I've updated the post and bracketed the new material (in 3 places) with [NEW] and [END NEW]. There's also a link posted in the author's notes which takes you to some new material for chapter 3 which introduces a fourth new character. They don't materially change chapter 5--just made it an even longer travelogue--but all of these folks will be coming into play later on, in one way or another.
Blarghity blargh! First drafts are so much fun.
Other than revising, I've been working around the house the last two days. I've finally gotten my energy back and I thought I should accomplish something before going back to work on Tuesday. ::sigh::