It's in the bag with the kitchen sink
Sep. 24th, 2009 05:23 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Chapter 15 came together much better than I thought it would, including a couple of new, shiny kitchen sinks—but what are ya gonna do? I'll reread it at a later date to see if it works. I'm a little worried about the Return of the Convenient Character syndrome, as I was worried about the Whiplash Turn of Character Motivation in Chapter 14, but I'm moving forward anyway. All things are for smoothing in the next draft.

And here's the word count with the material I'm currently working included:

And here's the word count with the material I'm currently working included: