Why you do me like that, Charlie?

[pjthompson]

The heroine of my novel Venus in Transit has been named Marian St. Cloud for at least ten years, ever since I first started working on the beginning inkling ideas for the book. Now this movie comes along and I’m thinking the whole St. Cloud family of Dos Lunas might have to have their names changed. I’m not going to do that now, because that name is so entrenched in my consciousness, but I assume that everyone will assume that I stole it from the movie.

It looks like a fairly paint-by-the-numbers, dorky movie, too.

Of course, I still have to finish the read-through, the time with betas, the hardcore rewrite, then the marketing of this novel, so considerable time could elapse before even the possibility of a publisher or readers seeing it. Maybe ol’ Charlie will have faded from memory by then. Or maybe it will become a huge freaking hit, what with soulfully blue-eyed Zak Efron drawing in the sighing crowd. I don’t know.

Names and titles. They’re tricky business in the fiction game.

In other but related fictive news: Titles come to me out of the ether on a regular basis, often without a story attached. I keep a file just for those. Sometimes they’re so suggestive that I have to come up with a story to go with them. It becomes an obsession. Blood Geek was one of those. Ironically, sometimes the name that gets me to write the story becomes obsolete with the writing and has to be changed. Charged with Folly was like that. It became A Rain of Angels. Changing titles like that can be painful.

I’ve got another title that popped through the ether the other day. A drumbeat has started in the center of my body. Good stories begin in my brain, of course, but the ones which have to be written always eventually migrate to my core, to my second brain: the heart. I have no idea what this story is about, but it’s already migrated.

We’ll see what comes of that.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

Comments

[sartorias.livejournal.com]

I do love A Rain of Angels.

[pjthompson]

Thanks.

[kmkibble75.livejournal.com]

I say leave it as is, and let the future editors/publishers worry about it. ;-)

[pjthompson]

That's what I'm going to do! Marian's had that name much longer. :-D

[marycatelli]

What's specially fun is if they change from under a title and refuse to come up with a new one.

[pjthompson]

Oh gawd, don't I know. I had one that refused to change even though it clearly didn't work anymore. Someone else actually had to change that one for me.

[rowanda380.livejournal.com]

yeah, the movie looks super lame, I am sure everyone will forget about it soon enough.

[pjthompson]

I can only hope that's the case. :-D