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Deleted prologues
Sometimes it takes me awhile to roll into short stories, long stretches of moody writing that help me get into the feel of the story and the characters. Often over-written. It's as if I'm writing a prologue for a short story.
This is one of many reasons why I am not a successful short story writer. Because almost inevitably, at some draft along the road, I'll realize that I may really like that prologue, but it doesn't belong there. It starts the story too early. It needs to be cut. It's a liberating feeling when I reach the point of objectivity that allows me to see that. I feel like maybe, finally, I'm getting closer to the real story. Sometimes that happens in a shorter amount of time, sometimes it takes many drafts. Hopefully, I haven't already sent it out to every likely market on the planet by the time I realize that. Usually not.
I think these deleted prologues are another indicator that I am by nature a novelist. They almost always have a novelistic feel, not that tight, essential feel of stories.
Here's one it took me only six years to delete. I don't know what else to do with it at this point, but I know it doesn't belong to this story.
( Deleted Prologue - Loose Dogs )
This is one of many reasons why I am not a successful short story writer. Because almost inevitably, at some draft along the road, I'll realize that I may really like that prologue, but it doesn't belong there. It starts the story too early. It needs to be cut. It's a liberating feeling when I reach the point of objectivity that allows me to see that. I feel like maybe, finally, I'm getting closer to the real story. Sometimes that happens in a shorter amount of time, sometimes it takes many drafts. Hopefully, I haven't already sent it out to every likely market on the planet by the time I realize that. Usually not.
I think these deleted prologues are another indicator that I am by nature a novelist. They almost always have a novelistic feel, not that tight, essential feel of stories.
Here's one it took me only six years to delete. I don't know what else to do with it at this point, but I know it doesn't belong to this story.
( Deleted Prologue - Loose Dogs )