Deleted prologues
Mar. 10th, 2010 12:45 pmSometimes it takes me awhile to roll into short stories, long stretches of moody writing that help me get into the feel of the story and the characters. Often over-written. It's as if I'm writing a prologue for a short story.
This is one of many reasons why I am not a successful short story writer. Because almost inevitably, at some draft along the road, I'll realize that I may really like that prologue, but it doesn't belong there. It starts the story too early. It needs to be cut. It's a liberating feeling when I reach the point of objectivity that allows me to see that. I feel like maybe, finally, I'm getting closer to the real story. Sometimes that happens in a shorter amount of time, sometimes it takes many drafts. Hopefully, I haven't already sent it out to every likely market on the planet by the time I realize that. Usually not.
I think these deleted prologues are another indicator that I am by nature a novelist. They almost always have a novelistic feel, not that tight, essential feel of stories.
Here's one it took me only six years to delete. I don't know what else to do with it at this point, but I know it doesn't belong to this story.
( Deleted Prologue - Loose Dogs )
This is one of many reasons why I am not a successful short story writer. Because almost inevitably, at some draft along the road, I'll realize that I may really like that prologue, but it doesn't belong there. It starts the story too early. It needs to be cut. It's a liberating feeling when I reach the point of objectivity that allows me to see that. I feel like maybe, finally, I'm getting closer to the real story. Sometimes that happens in a shorter amount of time, sometimes it takes many drafts. Hopefully, I haven't already sent it out to every likely market on the planet by the time I realize that. Usually not.
I think these deleted prologues are another indicator that I am by nature a novelist. They almost always have a novelistic feel, not that tight, essential feel of stories.
Here's one it took me only six years to delete. I don't know what else to do with it at this point, but I know it doesn't belong to this story.
( Deleted Prologue - Loose Dogs )