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This morning—or actually, I guess it's afternoon—I realized that I might not have dueling novels after all. I've been thinking of these as "part of JK's story" and "part of Sam's" story when, really, the answer has been staring me in the face all the time.

It's Ramona's story.

She won't be telling it herself and that's what's confused me. Ramona's story actually works better viewed from the observation of others, and that's a deeply unconventional way of telling a story, at least for me. But it's an ironic, twisty, humorous story—although I doubt Ramona would understand the irony of it all. She is, within her narrow confines, even more earnest than JK and deeply committed to her own P.O.V., and that view is often at odds with everyone else's perception of reality (including the reader's, I suspect). So the irony only works when told on the outside, and it's all about shaking up perception.

So I am both dismayed and energized by this revelation. The discovery process is what thrills me about writing, but now I have to refigure wherein square one lies so that I can mosey my way back to it. I suspect it starts with that damned story between JK and Ramona, but I'm not going to stop the flow of what's going on now in order to do that moseying. I'm pushing forward with this since it's flowing so well. If it dries up, or if it brings fresh revelations and ideas, I...may do something else.

In the meantime, onward.


I caught this morning morning's minion...
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My three day total:


Venus In Transit

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
4,500 / 100,000
(4.5%)



This total isn't really as impressive as it looks. To some of you, I realize, 4.5k words in three days isn't impressive at all, but those who have read this blog for awhile will know that's quite a lot for me. They're probably saying, "Wow, PJ's got rockets on her fingers."

Alas, no. This total represents some rewriting, some rearranging and editing of stuff I wrote before. A sort of pastiche which will hopefully make a more pleasing whole.

Instead of a hole.

The thing is, I've got a bit of "Dueling Novels" going on right now. That whole Ramona story is part of some other, larger story, the long unrealized and miasmic JK Montmorency novel. It keeps rearing its head in this story, so lawd knows what I'm about to make of this mess.

Hopefully, not a mess.

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