Publishing

Jan. 3rd, 2019 11:30 am
pjthompson: quotes (quotei)

Random quote of the day:

“Publishing a book is often very much like being put on trial for some offense which is quite other than the one you know in your heart you’ve committed.”

—Margaret Atwood, Negotiating with the Dead: A Writer on Writing

Disclaimer: The views expressed in this random quote of the day do not necessarily reflect the views of the poster, her immediate family, Laurel and Hardy, Ariana Grande, or the Salvation Army Band. They do, however, sometimes reflect the views of the Cottingley Fairies.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: myopia (glasses_pup)

Self-punishing* to get noticed by a corporate publisher?

 

 

*Self-publishing

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: myopia (glasses_pup)

Self-punishing* to get noticed by a corporate publisher?

 

 

*Self-publishing

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: parker writing (dorothy)

Dear Sir:

Your blog giving advice on doing quality self-publishing is riddled with careless typos. This does not inspire confidence. Yours, PJ

Dear Madam:

Your failure to distinguish between a Viking boat & a pirate ship when discussing cover art does not inspire confidence. Yours, PJ

Dear Madam:

Your blithe suggestions on how to squeeze more time out of a busy life for writing has PRIVILEGE scrawled all over it. No confidence. Yours, PJ

And that’s about all the writing/indy publishing blogging advice I can stomach for one day. Why did I inflict this upon myself in the first place? Clearly, I’m a masochist. Oh, I think maybe I’ll learn something that will revolutionize my life, get my creative life back on track and running smoothly. But no. There isn’t anything in any of these blogs that couldn’t be figured out by a half-witted horse with dyspepsia.

They are all written with such twerpy exuberance, too—the exuberance of those who have spent little time in the salt mines, whose biggest challenge in life balance seems to be choosing between watching TV with the wubs vs. social networking vs. actual writing.

I try hard not to think in terms of moral superiority—my reality vs. your networking reality—because as the old saying goes, “Everyone’s bag of stones weighs heavy to them.” But there’s generally an undertone of moral superiority running through these blogs, too. Sometimes not an undertone, but an overt and snot-nosed tone, if you want to know the truth. It’s hard not to get all morally-superioritying back at them.

Yet still these blogs are passed back and forth between hopefuls as if there’s some talismanic magic attached to them. The sad truth is that most seem more about having a platform for selling books than genuinely trying to help anyone. But I open each new one with hope, cynicism firmly suppressed because…well, I would like a little talismanic magic right about now. Maybe there will be some golden piece of wisdom my gassy, half-witted horse hasn’t already shared with me.

You see, I really am a masochist. Bring on the leather, the whips and chains!

ETA: There is actually quite a bit of really good advice out there, too, but wading through the self-involved claptrap to get to it can be quite discouraging.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

Dem bones

Jan. 19th, 2012 02:05 pm
pjthompson: parker writing (dorothy)

You know that thing where you’ve edited a book so often you’ve cut all the life out of it? Yeah, that.

I’ve been reading the last hardcore edit I did on Shivery Bones with an eye towards e-booking it in some future when I magically have the time and wherewithal. I haven’t read it in a year and a half. This is the first reread where I think the edit has actually damaged the book. I went from 122k to 109k and that seems to have stripped some of the flow and life. Understand, we’re talking about a first draft that came in around 150k, which was definitely bloated and in need of cutting. But I think now that 122k version may actually have been pretty tight. The last edit cut into bone.

Certain parts of the manuscript are better for that cutting, but other parts have a disjointed, lifeless feel. I’m considering going back to the the non-eviscerated versions of those scenes/chapters.

Some books can be cut down to bone and still retain life, but not all. I recently read a novel by an author I love. Her series tend to be magically imaginative and inventive, and her books are usually big. It doesn’t matter. I love being in them no matter how long they take to read. But she’s not on the bestseller lists, not quite, and I’ll bet you anything her publisher started blanching at those big manuscripts. I say that because the current book, part of a series I’ve loved as much as the author’s other books, is much shorter than previous ones. Throughout the reading, it felt incomplete to me, missing beats, wanting something that kept slipping through the fingers–cut to the bone and unable to quite articulate itself as those bones clattered along. A large part of the life had been taken away. I intuited that it had once been there, but no more.

In the current publishing climate, this is happening quite a lot to midlist writers. Even to some bestsellers, I hear. It’s a dirty, crying shame. These are half-books, not allowed to be what they naturally are. E-books, in the other hand, don’t have to be as skinny as paper books to “turn a profit.” (Though, don’t get me started on shaky publishing accounting. Better you should read this post by Kristine Kathryn Rusch.) (Thanks, safewrite, for the link.)

E-books don’t care if you go a little long. Which is not to say they shouldn’t be edited and made as tight and crisp as possible, but you don’t have to kill them in the process. They don’t have to rattle along like a defleshed skeleton struggling to keep itself in one piece.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: quotes (quotei)

Random quote of the day:

 

“I don’t know which way to turn.  I cannot decide what to write next.  That which I desire to write does not seem to be what the editors want…I am full of stories and zeal and fire…yet I am inhibited by doubt, by fear that my feeling for life is false.”

—Zane Grey, before he sold his first novel, quoted in Zane Grey: His Life, His Adventures, His Women by Thomas H. Pauly

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Disclaimer:  The views expressed in this random quote of the day do not necessarily reflect the views of the poster, her immediate family, Siegfried and Roy, Leonard Maltin, or the Mormon Tabernacle Choir. They do, however, sometimes reflect the views of the Cottingley Fairies.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: quotes (quotei)

Random quote of the day:

 

“I don’t know which way to turn.  I cannot decide what to write next.  That which I desire to write does not seem to be what the editors want…I am full of stories and zeal and fire…yet I am inhibited by doubt, by fear that my feeling for life is false.”

—Zane Grey, before he sold his first novel, quoted in Zane Grey: His Life, His Adventures, His Women by Thomas H. Pauly

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Disclaimer:  The views expressed in this random quote of the day do not necessarily reflect the views of the poster, her immediate family, Siegfried and Roy, Leonard Maltin, or the Mormon Tabernacle Choir. They do, however, sometimes reflect the views of the Cottingley Fairies.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: (salome)

Sometimes, for your own sanity, you have to stop reading “How To” articles and blogs and go away somewhere else in your mind for awhile. Really. Stop reading. Save yourselves. You can always pick them up again in a week or a month or a year. You won’t miss anything of importance. It will all be recycled endlessly again and again and again.

This is somewhat related to today’s quote of the day.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: (Default)
Sometimes, for your own sanity, you have to stop reading "How To" articles and blogs and go away somewhere else in your mind for awhile. Really. Stop reading. Save yourselves. You can always pick them up again in a week or a month or a year. You won't miss anything of importance. It will all be recycled endlessly again and again and again.

This is somewhat related to today's quote of the day.
pjthompson: parker writing (dorothy)

I’ve been reading some good blog posts lately about self-publishing and quality control. First from Richard Parks:

“Evolve or Die”

Then, by way of his comment thread, Jim Van Pelt:

“Writing: Self Publishing and Quality”

“Evolution of a Writer”

“So How, Exactly, Does a Writer Grow”

“Evolution of a Writer (redux)”

They support the new publishing paradigm of “indies,” but they also talk about the vetting process that Big Time Publishing does to separate the wheat from the chaff for readers, to cut down on the high ratio of noise to signal when everybody who can starts slapping their writing against the walls of the internet. They also talk about the stages in a writer’s development, how rejection and writers’ groups and critiques, et al., help the conscientious writer improve her craft.

But I’m not going to paraphrase what they say. Read the articles yourself—they state their case better than I can restate it.

What I am going to say here is that, for the most part, I think they’re correct. Oh yes, I am considering adding to the white noise by self-pubbing one of my novels, but I don’t do it out of any sense that this is going to be a Brave New World for me: doors that have hitherto been closed to will suddenly fly open and I will become the next web millionaire. I think that if I sell one copy I’ll be lucky. I haven’t got a pre-sold audience, see, and making oneself heard through the sea of static is quite difficult to do without making oneself obnoxious on every writers’ and readers’ forum on the interdweebs.

So no, I’m not considering doing this with the expectation of Incredible! Breakthroughs! and Millions! I’m doing this purely to have something out there, something I can point people to if they happen to get curious.

I’ve done a hellacious amount of writing (almost certainly a lot of hellacious writing). I have done a heap and then some of critiques, and I have received a heap and then some of critiques. I have submitted and submitted and gotten feedback. All of that, the giving and the getting, have been invaluable to me, have made me grow as a writer, have improved my craft. Some very generous and talented writers and editors have given me priceless feedback. I have listened, I have learned, I have grown.

But I have little to show for that yet. Maybe I didn’t listen and learn enough, maybe I haven’t grown enough. Or maybe my subconscious and writerly changes proceed at ice floe speed. None of that advice has been wasted or ignored. I just process it in a different time zone. I haven’t given up on trying to grow and I haven’t given up on traditional publishing, perverse and dog-eared as that belief may sometimes be. I see no reason not to pursue both e-publishing and traditional publishing at the same time.

Because I do believe in that vetting process. It provides a valuable service. I do not believe there is a vast conspiracy to keep the little people down. Not everybody is as good as they think they are. Myself included. I want to put out the best product I can. I want to grow an audience. Writing isn’t just about screaming to be heard, it isn’t just about gushing out Your Message. It’s about honing your craft. For that, you need the input of other people, the ones existing outside your own head. Not the ones who love you and want to be your friend, or the ones who you’re related to by blood or marriage. No, I’m talking about objective others who have no vested interest in convincing you that you are a Special Puppy and a Very Good Dog. People who are generous enough to be honest with you about what works and what does not work in your Very Special Creation.

That is truly what separates the wheat from the chaff. That’s truly what turns white noise into a beautiful melody.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: new cover (blood geek2)

Here are some more ETA’s to my long list of e-publishing links.

Some of these posts debate one another, which I suppose is a healthy thing. Damned confusing, though. The truth, I suspect, is that nobody really has a handle on the current truth. The publishing world is changing fast, and changing again even faster.

Book View Café Blog/Brenda Hough – Getting Your Backlist Up: A Report from the 2011 Nebulas.

I’m leading off with this one because it is chock full of helpful links and how-to’s—a great place to start. Thanks to sartorias for providing the link on her blog. Some of these other links were provided by others, but frankly, I’ve forgotten where I got them. But they are much appreciated!

Dear Author – Why DRM Won’t Be Abandoned Soon.

DGLM Literary Agency – If you get it for free…

Sean Cregan/John Richards – Price, Insanity and The Race To The Bottom.

John Vorhaus at Writer Unboxed – Let’s Have a Pity Party.

Ellen Fisher – Intriguing.

Richards Parks – Good Idea, Bad Idea (Ebooks) and Good Idea, Bad Idea – Continued.

Guido Henkel – Take pride in your eBook formatting.

This is part one of a nine part series. You can click through from here to the other posts.

Smashwords – How to Publish and Distribute Ebooks with Smashwords.

Blood Geek cover design by F-Bod Studios.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: (lilith)

ETA: Okay, no more excuses left. Time to finish the last chapters of the current WIP rewrite so I can start editing the old novel…

Two more ETAs for my list of posts on e-books and e-publishing. This first one also has some interesting perspective on the Amazon announcement that e-books are outselling paper books at their site.

Victoria Strauss: The Gloves Are Off.

Forbes: Is there gold in your backlist?

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: new cover (blood geek2)

As I’ve said before, I’ve been reading excessively and obsessively on this for months and months. I thought of doing a distillation post, but that proved far too cumbersome for the time I had to do it—and really, it’s not my call to make. Everyone has to make up their own mind on this, and I am far from being an expert experiencer.

So I’ve decided to post a sampling of what other people have said. These are not posted in any particular order, but there is both pro and con. I am probably leaving out somebody or some post that is essential to this discussion and will probably smack myself upside the head for it later, so if any of you think I should add anything to this list, leave the link or whatever in the comments and I’ll add an ETA section.

I hope this is helpful.

Ebooks and Self-Publishing – A Dialog Between Authors Barry Eisler and Joe Konrath

The Washington Post: Novel rejected? There’s An E-book Gold Rush!

Ilona Andrews: On E-books, Realistic Expectations (A 4-page, comprehensive analysis)

Tracy Marchini: Five Things I’ve Learned by E-publishing

The New York Times: Book Country by Penguin – Aspiring Authors Get Help Online

DGLM Literary Agency: If a Publisher or Agent Came Calling

Victorine Lieske: Reasons Why You Should Not Self-publish

David Rothstein: Midnight and I’m Not Famous Yet

Amanda Hocking: Some Things That Need to Be Said

Jim C. Hines: The Anti-NY Playbook (Bashing Commercial Publishing)

Ellen Fisher: Unexpected Loss of Income, or Why Indie Publishing Can Be a Bit Scary

Ellen Fisher: The Vulnerability of Being a Writer

ETA:

Kristine Kathryn Rusch — Trust Me.

Kristine Kathryn Rusch — Writing Like It’s 1999.

Jennifer Laughran — On Agency Agreements.

A. C. Crispin — The Interminable Agency Clause.

Victoria Strauss: The Gloves Are Off.

Forbes: Is there gold in your backlist?

Book View Café Blog/Brenda Hough - Getting Your Backlist Up: A Report from the 2011 Nebulas. Chock full of helpful links and how-to's—a great place to start. Thanks to sartorias for providing the link on her blog.

Dear Author - Why DRM Won’t Be Abandoned Soon.

DGLM Literary Agency - If you get it for free…

Sean Cregan/John Richards - Price, Insanity and The Race To The Bottom.

John Vorhaus at Writer Unboxed - Let’s Have a Pity Party.

Ellen Fisher - Intriguing.

Richards Parks - Good Idea, Bad Idea (Ebooks) and Good Idea, Bad Idea - Continued.

Guido Henkel - Take pride in your eBook formatting. This is part one of a nine part series. You can click through from here to the other posts.

Smashwords - How to Publish and Distribute Ebooks with Smashwords.

Blood Geek cover design by F-Bod Studios.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: (lilith)

I spent a lot of time on the phone yesterday with the Verizon Wireless helpline. The computer had a hard time processing the idea that 1) I was ordering a phone for my mother but 2) I wanted the bill sent to me and 3) I didn’t want the new number to replace my current number. She was a nice lady and during downtime while computer got on with things, we chatted. I found out she was a painter in her real life, she that I was a writer. She encouraged me to not worry about selling my novels to traditional publishers. Did I know that I could publish them myself as ebooks?

Yes, thank you, I said. I was investigating that possibility quite thoroughly, not to worry. We concluded our business (successfully) and parted friends. Of a completely temporary nature.

The thing is, I am considering doing my own ebook. The proponents of indie publishing make some good points. The opponents of indie publishing and those who favor traditional publishing (who are not necessarily the same people) also make some good points. It’s a long, hard slog to do it yourself. It can be expensive and a great drain on one’s writing time. I would much rather go with traditional publishing, frankly, and I am still pursuing that for my more recent work. But I have some older stuff that isn’t bad, that I still take pride in, and I’d like to get it out there. I haven’t fully committed to the idea of publishing my own ebook, but I am starting to slowly roll towards that cliff edge.

Don’t get me wrong: I have absolutely no expectation of making money this way. Money is not at all why I’m considering this. I am not looking at the success of Amanda Hocking and Stephanie McAfee and thinking, “Wow! That could be me!” I haven’t got a name or a pre-sold “brand,” I don’t have the time to do the kind of gonzo marketing ebooks require—not with a full-time job and being a part-time caretaker. I am not a poster girl for possible ebook success. I think I understand the cold, hard facts of that.

But I would like one or two of these older novels to be out there. I’d like at least a shot of finding some kind of audience for them, however miniscule. They deserve their shot while I’m actively pursuing my shot at traditional things with the other books.

I am willing to be talked into or out of this. Don’t assume I’m stupid or haven’t read excessively and obsessively about all the pros and cons of indie publishing, but I am completely open to discussion on this. I welcome input and would like to hear what people think.

Cover design by F-Bod Studios.

Mirrored from Better Than Dead.

pjthompson: (Default)
Congratulations to [livejournal.com profile] stillnotbored for just scoring a three book hardcover deal with Tor books!! She's worked so hard and long to get here and I can't help getting a little weepy thinking about this, but it's a good weepy! A really good weepy!

And Delia's Shadow (the first of the three books) is a really good book. I'm so excited at the prospect of reading more in the series.

All Hail, Jaime!
pjthompson: (Default)
Congratulations to [personal profile] stillnotbored for just scoring a three book hardcover deal with Tor books!! She's worked so hard and long to get here and I can't help getting a little weepy thinking about this, but it's a good weepy! A really good weepy!

And Delia's Shadow (the first of the three books) is a really good book. I'm so excited at the prospect of reading more in the series.

All Hail, Jaime!
pjthompson: (Default)
★ I have an herb garden and periodically I gather herbs to hang them from the rafters so they can dry and I can bottle them. I usually hang these in the entryway to the house because that's the lowest part of the ceiling and, well, it does make for some interesting conversations when guests come over. I hung some dill weed quite some time ago and I've been trying to remember to take the durned thing down and bottle it, but yanno: lax.

I felt something brush my hair last night and realized one sprig had detached itself from the bunch and was hanging way down. "I should do something about that," I said, and promptly forgot about it. I had the same experience this morning with the same results. When it happened again as I was rushing to get out of the house, I didn't even bother to look up at it—just hurried out the door.

When I got to work my colleague asked, "What's that in your hair?" Yes, that's right: it was that selfsame piece of a dried dill weed. That last snag had detached it and I wore it like a jaunty beret in my hair. I walked through the corporate lobby like that. ::sigh::

★ And speaking of hopeless geeks crying in the wilderness, I've begun submitting corrections to thinkexist.com's quote collection when I find their errors. Like they're going to pay any attention! At least they have a corrections form. So called brainyquote.com didn't. Nor did the quotationspage.com. I was, however, gratified to see that the quotationspage had gotten the quote I was correcting correct. I don't recommend any of these pages, btw. They all have a tendency towards misquotes and rarely have sources.

★ All week Min has been coming into the bedroom at about 3:30 a.m. to meow loudly and insistently until I wake up. Once she sees I'm conscious, she lays down on top of me and starts purring loudly, ready for sleep. It's as if she's saying, "Hey, did you know that you were asleep? Just wondered." Fortunately, I'm able to go right back to sleep or she would be a deceased kitty by this time.

★ I am not in Montreal this week. I will, however, be going to lovely seaside San Pedro tomorrow evening for a picnic and Shakespeare in the park (Point Fermin). We're going to see As You Like It. Last year when we did this it was great fun. Ann is bringing a wee bit of champagne because all three of us have something to celebrate this year.

★ Since I gave up writing for publication, the writing is going much better.
pjthompson: (Default)
And with his concurrence, I am posting some pictures I took in Lyme Regis in spring '04. I should warn you: they're a pretty pathetic collection. This was our first stop out of London, and I was just getting reacquainted with my SLR after a few years of taking no pictures whatsoever. I like to think the pictures got better as the trip progressed, but between jet lag, fatigue and technical malfeasance, these ain't much. Certainly Lyme Regis deserved better.

We drove from London (about 160 miles?) and stopped in Dorchester for lunch. A lovely little town! We booked our B&B at the Tourist Information center there, then decided to head a bit north to visit Cerne Abbas. For half my life I'd wanted to visit the giant etched into the chalk hillside there, the so-called Rude Man. You can read about him here. I had no idea that every picture I'd ever seen of him was an aerial shot. I had this vision in my brain, you see, that he was on a steep hillside and you could see him stretched out clearly, but alas, it was a crashing disappointment when I got there. Plus, I'd always had this idea that I'd walk up onto the hillside and traipse along up there with him. But it had rained heavily that morning and the hillside was sucking mud. Besides, after our lunch in Dorchester, my stomach was giving me fits so we cancelled the climb and got back on the road. I was depressed and cranky by the time I got to Lyme, hence I didn't do it justice.

We did book a lovely B&B high on a hillside overlooking the bay, but it was getting rather late in the day by the time we got there. Our hosts told us of a neaby river walk that would take us to the shore. It was quite lovely, a narrow footpath winding in and out amongst the buildings as the river itself does. Ducks everywhere riding the current, and charming buildings. But mostly too dark for decent pictures. When we reached the shore, the shops were much the same as you'd expect from any seaside town tourist destination. We also realized we were on the exact opposite side of town from the famous Cob, the landmark made famous by The French Lieutenant's Woman and other films. I'd wanted to see that half my life, too, and walk out there pretending to be Meryl Streep.

But we were tired, cranky, and quite hungry by that time. We turned around and headed back towards the river walk and a interesting restaurant we'd seen there. I felt quite dispirited at this point. Plus, at dinner there was this loud Australian woman at the next table talking about why she couldn't get any of her romances published in the United States (although she did quite well in the Commonwealth countries). "They're all so bloody ignorant and have no idea how to spell proper English. They wanted me to go through everything and change the spelling and the British English. I'd be damned if I would. They're just so ignorant!" Her friends kept trying to shush her because they'd realized we were Americans, but it did no good. I also wondered if they recognized us from earlier in the evening? They were staying at the same B&B. It made for quite and "interesting" breakfast the next morning.

I should say at this point that I've generally found Australians to be charming people. This woman was not one of them. And her reasons for not publishing in the US sounded like bloody feeble excuses to me. I'd bet good money she couldn't sell any of her books to American publishers, hence the vitriol.

The walk back to the B&B along the river walk at night revived my spirits, though. Water and night time have always been my friends. The water babbled beautifully, little ducks were talking in the water, and tiny bats swooped through the night, making a chirping sound. (Who knew echo location could be so lovely?) I'm not at all freaked by bats. I find them fascinating. And these were not even as large as my hand.

So we left Lyme Regis early the next morning for Bodmin, and I felt as if I cheated the place, I really did. What I saw of it was lovely, but we should have gotten there earlier in the day to do it justice. In the middle of the night, however, I had made some accommodation with my disappointment of the day. I woke up about 3 a.m., unable to go back to sleep due to the jet lag and decided to sit at the window and watch the sun rise over Lyme Bay. It was hushed, just me and the ghosts, and something inside me relaxed into the moment, letting go of expectations and letting this trip be what it was, not what I thought it should be. Gradually, the sky lightened, the gulls began to cry, the birds to chirp, and the dawn found me at peace. It turned out to be a really good trip.

Here's what I wrote while I watched the sunrise.

And here's the first postings of my new photo album. I had these posted at another site that went belly up and never got around to reposting them. I'll gradually be adding the pictures from the trip as time permits. As I said, I do believe the pictures got better as the trip progressed. These first ones are not that great, but I did get reacquainted with the SLR after awhile.

And here's just the pix of Lyme Regis, such as they are. )
pjthompson: (Default)
There was a good post on the writer's dilemma in regards to publishing at Editorial Ass today. A sympathetic look at the various minefields a writer must consider.

And another good post on writing speed over at Writer Unboxed. There's all kinds of ways to write books, and no right way. What ultmately matters is not how fast or slow, but whether your technique helps you consistently finish books.

Me? I'm thinking a lot about structure these days. I have a twisty mind that comes up with complex stories and sometimes getting it on the page is tough. I think I've got the sentence-level stuff working pretty well; I think I'm doing a pretty good job with characters. My plotting skillz are okay, but could still use some work, I think. But structure--structure structure structure structure structure. That's killing me. I find myself wondering if I'm attempting things that I may not yet be good enough to pull off.

I'm mulling a lot. Thinking, pondering, weighing, sifting.

I suspect this trend will continue.

Meanwhile, the rewrite continues.

A Rain of Angels

Profile

pjthompson: (Default)
pjthompson

December 2025

S M T W T F S
 1234 56
78910111213
14151617181920
21222324252627
28293031   

Syndicate

RSS Atom

Most Popular Tags

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Apr. 1st, 2026 12:42 am
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios